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I count the stars

And I take comfort

In the fact

That in

Some house

On some street

In some town

You are counting too.



I watch the moon shiver

And I smile

Because I know

That in

Some house

In some yard

In some neighbourhood

You are shivering too.


I see the darkness reach far beyond my eyes                      

And I relax a lil

Because I can tell

That in

Some house

In some universe

In some galaxy

Your eyes darken too.



I sigh into the still air

And it eases me

That I can feel

That in

Some house

In some life

In some existence

Your breath fills the silence.



I count the stars

And warmth captures me

Because I know

That in

Some house

In some bed

In my dreams

You are counting too.
©2007-2009 ~noodle-soup
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I Like this, Your comments are welcome as always.

Even though i am unsure of everything else about him, I know maybe somewhere hes doing the same thing.
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Aww, that's lovely! :heart:

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I like the idea of this one, the lines give it nice structure too :)

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~Music is what feelings sound like~
I like the way this is written. and the concept behind it as well.
aww I like that

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There's a fine line between love and hate. Love frees a soul and in the same breath can sometimes suffocate it...
Thank you so much :)

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Thanks heaps :)

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
Thank you so so much :)

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
Thanks sweets

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
That's so cute~ :heart: In fact, it makes me so happy that I don't even know how to begin to describe it... T_T You've made me speechless~ :+favlove:

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